Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Famous Five( Five on a Secret Trail)- Book Review

Title: Famous Five-Five on a Secret Trail

Five on a Secret Trail (Famous Five)Author: Enid Blyton

Characters: George( Georgina), Anne, Timmy the dog, Julian and Dick.

Summery:
Anne and George were bored having a holiday without their favourite cousins, Julian and Dick, and George was convinced that there would be no mystery to solve without her to cousins around. A few days later, Julian and Dick arrived at Kirrin Cottage to join George and Anne! Poor Timmy had cut his ear and had to wear a cardboard collar and everyone that saw him teased and laughed at him. George was fed up and decided to camp out with her cousins. While they were camping, they discovered a gang of thieves were planning to steal some valuable blueprints! Find out whether the five solved the mystery... I think this story is a little scary but they exaggerate the story so that it is very exciting!

2 comments:

Adrian Lee said...

Here are some pointers:

1. Split your book review into paragraphs.

2. The last sentence is your opinion which must go into a new paragraph.

3. Tell your readers where to get the book online. Create an amazon affiliate link.

Well done, Flying Cheryl!

Adrian Lee said...

Another pointer:

I noticed spelling errors.

. Do a spell check.
. Blogger has a spell check function built in. Use it.

:)